All Comments on 'The Dinner Pickup'

K needs to breed t

You are on a good start... starting with a cuck shit.

Your future on LV is set in the swamp of shit that go with cuck crap.

Well Done!

Good story. I would have liked it better without the alone time.

This would be readable if you used names instead of letters for names. Just make up some appropriate names.

Love to hear the next stories of K and T. I thinking breeding is a must too.

USE NAMES

dumb.

Wonderful, I cant wait to hear about her meeting his friends.

Kinky

Being a submissive, this really got my motor hummin'!

I know a lot of people don't "get it" and I didn't either until I had sex with a true Alpha male that made me be submissive to him - not the abusive way, but just because he was naturally dominant. That is when I realized I LOVE, LOVE, LOVE being submissive for the right man! A dominant man is not an abusive man. Those are two different things. The scene was fun to me. Yes there are things I might change, but it's your story. I notice a lot of commenters want to tell you what you should have done or what to have them do next...they should write their own stories!

Being a submissive, this really got my motor hummin'!

I LOVE THE ALONE TIME! After getting to know my lovers well enough that we were all comfortable, I always looked forward to the alone time when I could just relax and concentrate on pleasing my MAN!

I know a lot of people don't "get it" and I didn't either until I had sex with a true Alpha male that made me be submissive to him - not the abusive way, but just because he was naturally dominant. That is when I realized I LOVE, LOVE, LOVE being submissive for the right man! A dominant man is not an abusive man. Those are two different things. The scene was fun to me. Yes there are things I might change, but it's your story. I notice a lot of commenters want to tell you what you should have done or what to have them do next...they should write their own stories!

Very hot story.

I hope that you write more about your very submissive, very obedient wife!