All Comments on 'A Discovery and a Taking'

****Different style of writing. But still a good read. Thanks for sharing.

Another masterpiece! I became your fan after reading Thakur and Bahu series but you have not written much for a long time. Good to know that you have not lost the touch yet. You have an amazing way to portray sexual relationship between older man and young woman! Keep writing.

wow! loved it!

Great to have you back, man. Love your stories. Would love to read more such stories but in reverse between ooder women and young men.

Keep writing!

You are a real writer. You should write often...Waiting for your new story

It was a good story ,as I was reading it I couldn't stop thinking, wishing it was my wife and not the your lass.

I gave you 5 stars

From the old one

Coming after six months and delighted to see Narayan mama in action again, unless there are two of them. exquisite storytelling with the usual deft touch. I liked the old fashioned word "ponne" Nobody else could do it.

Trust there will be more. My best wishes

Please continue. I'm a big fan of your writing. You are exceptional!!! Will be happy to read more stories of Narayan mama.

What a delightful story!