All Comments on 'A Doe in the Woods'

That was a really good start!

Great story. Fun read. I like the main character. I wouldn't mind hearing more stories about this summer camp.

I enjoyed the idea - and you weren't always predictable with the direction of your story.

Read your story aloud before you publish but keep writing! Will be interesting to see your work in the future.

This didn't read like a typical story. Id like to read more from you.

Something different and intriguing

What a fun and trippy story. Reminds me of an X-Files episode (yeah, I'm old) with the giant mushroom fungus spore thingy that captured people and made them hallucinate while they were slowly digested by the plant. I wonder if Doe will wander back down the forbidden path? And if she does, what's she in for?

this is such a cool story, and such excellent writing!!!!

I liked the attention your attention to detail when describing the plant, it was so vivid<3