by sirsemega
You seem to have a great rage in you that you let out in your writings... But the way you revenge yourself on your characters is not good... Find someone you trust to talk with... This will only take you down... Cheers Yoron.
I don't see this story as a BDSM story. It seems to me that this is as close to real life as it gets. It's just the nature of things. People are not equal, and never have been. I'm still suprised that the master has bothered to take this slut back at all, and I was prepared to write him off as a softcock wimp. But he seems to have a little steel behind his soft persona, by allowing this piece of trash in his house under such conditions. We shall see if he softens up or continues to teach the slave the true nature of life...
was ok to start a little far fetched it seems but now it jsut dragging on an on get it over with already i am done reading it now