All Comments on 'A Dragon's Tale Ch. 37'

Another nice story.

Excelent use of references of movies.

Waiting for kendra to join the bunch at night.

Whats with selene ?

Glad too read another chapter of this story...more please

Awesome that you had a TSM reference. It's nice to see authors dropping names and supporting each other. You and Tefler are two of my favorite authors and I greatly look forward to each chapter. Keep up the great writing and stories.

Just thought I would express how much I enjoy reading your story. TSM and this are my two favorite.

I appreciated the TSM reference as I have been reading Tefler'a work as well. It did draw me out of the story for a moment, but only to smirk at the reference before diving back in.

Please keep up the great work. I really like you writing.

Loved the TSM reference and the new chapter, keep it up, it's good :)

Very good installment of my co-favorite story. And a reference to TSM, my other favorite, just need Tefler to reference this masterpiece and the circle of awesomeness will be complete. Only problem is waiting for the next chapter, wishing Kendra would give in, getting Selene onboard, rescuing Sarah and which wife will get pregnant next!

At some point Selene is going to break out her 20 years of jiu jitsu on someone other than the girl with demonic strength and completely wreck shop.

Well done with the reference to Three Square Meals

Nice 3rd wall moment, but your building your own world and writing a great story. Keep it up

Loved the TSM ref!

Great chapter, but Selene is going to be a mind reader of some kind, right. The whole analogy of the bread and the affinities, you can go a little easier with the "bread crumbs". I find it funny when I re-read a story from the beginning and catch all the foreshadowing the author made.

The shoutout to tefler my god! Honestly, im not sure wich story id pick between the two. Lucky i dont have to!

The "broken birds" thing is kind of obnoxious. Why can't a confident and together woman love a guy? And why is the male character always self-flagellating about his sexuality? It's promoting the idea that only sick women would desire a guy, and that male sexuality is inherently wrong to express.

Hopefully Tefler isnt gone forever like Intrepid Fate seems to be

Love that Selene reads TSM!

Love this story' thanks

I'm generally not a fan of authors referencing other stuff on lit, but I kind of like this one. Selene has gone on at length about not wanting to share her guy, and it turns out she reads TSM, erotica which features that exact thing. Hmmm...

Good as always.

Looking forward to each new chapter in this story. You nod to TSM was great. I have been reading that from day one. Keep this one going as you are doing a great job.

Thanks was getting worried you gave up the show great addition to the story.

"Damn bursting" instead of "dam bursting" has flown under the radar yet again.

TSM references means we're now gonna be seeing the Argo outfitted with advanced Dwarven and Ancient Elven technology while he fly's all over the 3 Kingdoms saving damsels in distress!

My absolute favorite story right now.

Another great chapter.

The nod to TSM was out of the blue, to me, and I was so upset that I cant adequately explain to anybody why the smut I'm reading just made me laugh out loud.

I love that you refer to the Invictus!

Love the nod to TSM. Too bad Ethan is limited to seven. At least Mr.Blake can enTHRALL the whole female half of the universe. GIGGITY!

as Always. a wonderful read. thank you

I note that Selene read TSM, despite being insistent that she wants nothing to do with polygyny/polyamory. That may become an important point, later. (Also, she may find her own "doth protest too much" comment coming back to bite her.)

I've enjoyed the series, & hope to see more.

I'm savoring the last moments with his 6 core girls. I don't know how Sarah's going to fit in and I *really* don't like that she makes Alana feel insecure. It's hard to see what she might really add to the family.

I would say Sarah herself will help Alana to feel better about that. She cares about people, she cooks, Selene will not be so lonely, Sarah and Taloni will share their spirituality and boost their sweetness. A lot to add to the family, not even counting Ethan.

I guess we'll find out. Tbh I think Beth is just OK, I like the idea of Taloni but she's annoyingly sweet at times, I can't tell if I find Kendra attractive (I literally have no sense of her appearance except that she's nondescript - so I guess that's good writing - and has black hair), but I do like her dynamic. Selene's connection to Earth is cool and I'd appreciate even more "in jokes.". But, overall, I'd be happy with just Alana and Rachel.

So, yeah, Sarah has an uphill climb with me.

I would like to second beach-buoy's comment to the previous chapter. I've binge-read upto there and this waiting for the next installment is not good, the story on the otherhand is very good indeed

I thought that was a TSM reference and was surprised I had happened to read it as well

I have a really bad feeling about Kendra. I re-read the chapter in Ethan speak with God and I get the bad feeling Kendra might be forced to bed Ethan. The Dragon doesn't care about consent and God told him to trust him in matters of bedding his wives. I hope I'm wrong but it looks like that is were is this going and I don't like it one bit.

Good story. Thanks.

Great shout out to the wounded birds of the Invictus!!! Great story and I really enjoying the ride.

I'm not an person that likes to point out errors, but this one through me. To be fair the second one is more petty but I figured since I was going to comment I should mention it.

The first was when Lord Borden was there with his mage.

"What did you do to Selene?" Beth asked, standing up and looking rather more like her husband's dragon side than usual.

Valten looked at Lord Delmar, who gave a small nod, and then the mage looked at the blonde. "I was trying to confirm the story that you told Captain Heinrich."

The author refers to him as lord Delmar. Rachel's father not Beth's father.

The second one Is when beth is describing her drink.

She frowned slightly, then took another sip. "It's not bad. The heat and coolness together is..." She took another small sip, then thought to everyone. *I think I like it. Not sure I'd want it very often, but I like it.*

If I'm not mistaken, that was the description of the burning airship. I might be wrong on that one.

Also, I enjoyed the TSM shout out. Actually, I love all the shout outs, in here. From the movie quotes, and common phrases. Too many of these stories that jump worlds, leave those out. It's a sign of being a really good author.

Keep up the good work,

Buddy J.

Love the story! I can hardly wait for the next chapter!

There’s nothing wrong with being inspired by another story, especially a good one. Also it was cool to put a shout out in for three square meals.

Hmmm Just thinking about the conversation between Selene and Rachel. Baking bread and such.....

I'm actually interested in a pissed off Beth and her father having a 'talk'. This might be really good, or really bad.

Just my thoughts,

Buddy J

Loved the TSM reference. Also some similarities with HFHM, though I like how each has unique contributions beyond the sex

Honestly I think I picked up your story before Teflers, caught up, and waited a year or two to catch up again and went through and read Tefler's epic in the mean time. Honestly for both stories, I have genuinely ignored the sex scenes more often than not because the wider story is more engaging. Theres a few series like that I have to remember occasionally to come back and check for updates.

Now that is even Funnier. love this.

Love your story. What's TSM?

I have read every chapter of TSM, 4 times over, and I loved the reference. This story reminded me of it.