All Comments on 'A Dream Vacation, Ch. 01'

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Wilson SpaldingWilson Spalding9 months ago

Truly fits "loving wife" – and I loved it!

The exhibitionism is... fantastic! It hints at things to come without giving away the game.

Wherever it goes, I'm exciting to see what happens!

⭐️ ⭐️ ⭐️ ⭐️ ⭐️

Boyd PercyBoyd Percy9 months ago

Great first story!

5

lc69hunterlc69hunter9 months ago

a very good start.

AnonymousAnonymous9 months ago

Well done. Did she have a reason for this action and her behavior?

mburs2016mburs20169 months ago

We need more looks to be a great story keep up the good work

AnonymousAnonymous9 months ago

First story? Written better than many with multitudes of stories. Ready for chapter 2, when I suppose there'll be that bastard that ruins it all. Wondering if I'm right. Can't wait! 4 stars Bob

AnonymousAnonymous9 months ago

Okay so far let's see what happens in the next chapter.

AnonymousAnonymous9 months ago

Not a fan of exhibitionism. Or nude beaches. Leads to cheating, swapping, swinging, sharing...all the things I hate. Which is probably where this story is heading in the future, so I'll not be reading anymore of it. 3*

straightshooter1958straightshooter19589 months ago

Now THIS is a LW story! Super first submission! Please don't take this to Cuckville.

AnonymousAnonymous9 months ago

Fun!

AnonymousAnonymous9 months ago

Yep. That’s hot.

Prince020402Prince0204029 months ago

Laughing at Anon comment "Not a fan of exhibitionism. Or nude beaches. Leads to cheating, swapping, swinging, sharing...all the things I hate."

Why the hell does he spend his time reading this site??

Good start. Will stay tuned to see where you take it. Please write your story. Don't let the peanut gallery dictate how you continue.

AnonymousAnonymous9 months ago

next chapter she wants to swing or cuckold him and ruin a good start?

AnonymousAnonymous9 months ago

Nice, wifey down for some fun, plenty of action writable at a vacation resort. Waiting for round 2

Demosthenes384bcDemosthenes384bc9 months ago

Great true loving wife story - don't screw it up! 4.8*

Regguy69Regguy699 months ago

Sometimes having an audience can spur one to a greater performance. Let's hope they focus on each other and don't slide off the cliff.

AnonymousAnonymous9 months ago

I am an exhibitionist, and I happily and excitedly flash my body and have sex with my husband when we know someone, or more, are watching. It spices the vacation greatly, since we will never see the watchers again. Good story!

AnonymousAnonymous9 months ago

Good story between husband and wife. Everyone has a camera phone today so it can wind up all over the internet . Something tells me she will be taking huge local cock in coming chapters

OOAAOOAA9 months ago

Hot story and resorts holidays 😜

jazzharpjazzharp9 months ago

Cool! Hot!

Thanks for the straightforward erotic story. That's what I come here to read. Too few good ones in my opinion.

26thNC26thNC8 months ago

That Ribaldry can get a cuck into a lot of trouble.

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