by cantbelive01
Wow. A true story of a once respectable woman whoring herself out. I love blaming the vodka like thats an excuse. Hey, hopefully the sex was worth it though because it will probably cost you your marriage.
Ok, but too short because it leaves you hanging as to what happened; although the to be continues draws you back to see what it was....
So you regret becoming a slut whore who cheats on her wonderful husband. How about confessing to him and see if you can save your marriage.
Who cares about the cheating that happened? This short introduction has enough bullshit for 10 stories...1*
Hmm..
A sequel
Nope won't read the next chapter.
I'm not interested what a cheating spouse reminiscing her infidelity. If the next chapter contains her husband dumping her maybe I'll read it.
This is real huh? Of course it is. In the next chapter make sure your husband knows what you did and of course tell your kids and your parents and all your real friends what you did. Im sure they won't care.
So as this is a true story, right ?, can't wait to find out if you are still married or continuing to make your wonderful husband an unknowing cuck or maybe hubby agrees to share you with others. And if you try to make this a happy ending story ……. Good Luck with that.
If there's more, why post only 1,000 words? Why not put chapter/part 1 in the title?
No, there is nothing to bring any reader back for another few paragraphs of this story. You should have finished and posted it.
Don't bother stringing this out. Just get to the part where hubby throws your slimy ass out on the street, frames you for child abuse, and you commit suicide. Then at the next Group meeting to mourn you, a "gas leak" blows the house and everyone in it straight to hell. Good story! P.S. It's your ghost writing this story while it watches hubby, his new wife, and your kids laughing and loving at Disneyland.
I'm hoping that the husband finds the whole thing exciting, and that he hopes that she'll continue playing and sharing her experiences with him. That just might draw him out of his way too long dry spell, and give them both a new lease on life.
"I've recently found out how attractive I am to younger men"
Honey, you're nothing but a piece of ass to these guys and another notch in their bed posts. And just stop with the true story bullshit. You and your husband are in your early 30's and you haven't had sex for 7 months?? Again, I'm calling bullshit. I seriously doubt you're old enough to even be on this site.
So you regret becoming a slut whore who cheats on her wonderful husband?
What makes him a "wonderful" husband? He ain't laying pipe.
I wonder if any of these authors can write a story where the woman is a 21st century woman: makes .85 of the husband, hasn't given the husband complete financial (and other) authority over her. I am married and I would never consider locking someone out, spying on her phone, etc.
That said, I don't consider my wife "property". If she decides to get some strange, as long as I don't know, I'm not going to worry. I could just as easily (possibly more easily) get some for me. It aint that big a deal...
So you have managed barely a page for your first effort. Please be patient and write at least two full pages before submitting any further parts. Give your readers something to get their teeth into!
I gave it a three. The writing was good but there should be much more to share, even if you have to make it up.
Ignore the psychopaths projecting their own serious mental problems onto you. I'm excited to read what happens next!
phill1c
I know you think the only quality to a husband is, 'laying pipe', but there is the whole GOOD GENETICS thing to carry on the family line. Basic human biology. Then there's financial success, social success, being a protector, being a provider, being funny, being an easy-going companion. You moron, you fool, you nincompoop.
Plenty of authors write women that make good money on here. And I'v only seen the kind of authority you mention RARELY on these sites. Most posit the wife has more control when it comes to spending and divorce gains. Sooo, you're in the wrong again. Maybe it's hard for you to read more than one story a day. Poor you.
Good for you, cuck. You got married. You want a prize? "I would never look at my wife's phone" Again, you want a medal? It's an invasion of privacy, but only white knights that wear cock cages seem to demean men that snoop. Women snoop, 21st century women especially, and it seems to be a celebrated thing. People make jokes about it. So grow up and join the 21st century. Where hook-up culture is normal, loyalty is rare, and people snoop.
Once again, you don't consider your wife property, do YOU WANT A PRIZE? I'm pretty sure the majority of everyone everywhere feel this way. It's not a bold position to hold. There's nothing brave and intelligent with falling in line with popular thinking. You don't mind if your wife cheats on you? That right there is a cuck. You even cemented it by saying you could easily get more pussy if you wanted. The key there is that you admitted you DIDN'T get strange pussy. And since you don't believe in loyalty nor vows, that means you are celibate because you most likely would have trouble doing so. That or your wife, that you don't mind cheats on you, satisfies you enough. So your libido is low. Either way, low-energy beta-male talk. And you're trying to preach it at people like a religion because misery loves company. Too bad, cuck. Enjoy your lonely life. Embrace your philosophy of making vows you don't intend to ever keep. Embrace being okay with your wife banging younger dudes, and treating you like a money cow. Just milking your financial titties like property. Squeeze squeeze, better produce more, lest she find a better cattle.
I can’t wait to hear how one of those young guys fucked her. Good for her.
I cant say for certain what the number is, but this little retread has had more than 3 other pen names, and he sucked just as bad with those as he does with this little shitfest.
You need to deliver a little more ASAP. I'll give you a 3, but this deserves a 1.
About the only pipe Phill1c is lay is some fat, ugly women or he's paying for it.