All Comments on 'A Fantasy Meet'

A decent second effort. Welcome to the fold. I was disappointed to see that you had no followers from your first effort. A well-received writer will average about 10 per story. Perhaps it is because you don't give us much in the story. There is enuf sex in this one, but not enuf background and character building. Next time let us know WHO these people are, not just an internet connection. Are they married, or engaged, or single? 20s, 40s, or 60s? Experienced or newbies. Gorgeous or homely. Make us give a shit. Do keep 'em coming.

If you would have done just a bit more research, you may see I've only been on the site for approx 2 weeks. I'm sorry I'm not an experienced author meeting all of your demands in my initial offerings.