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chytownchytownover 2 years ago

*****HOT Sexy and Mature can not get much better than this or that!! Very enjoyable read. Thanks for sharing,

MafenMafenover 2 years ago

I always worry when a writer manages to mangle their title before even getting to the story. Two mistakes. "seasondlovers and mastrey. And, sure enough 23 words into the story, we get another clunking grammatical error.

The rest of the story is just a list of clichés.

And what the heck is a 'divet'? Even spelled correctly, "divot" is a strange choice of word.

Get an editor.

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I use this to flex my writing muscles, and hopefully get people the world over to touch themselves and each other, which is my manifest destiny.