All Comments on 'A Fare to Remember'

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shopratshopratalmost 2 years ago

I liked it. Some of the flowery descriptive stuff should have come off as cheesy, but somehow it worked out - it's like it's just so corny it's charming. This is almost a straightforward "partner cheated, I found a better deal" story so it seemed to belong in LW, but I guess the descriptions and the brevity were enough to qualify it for H&S :-)

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Writing is my passion. Writing about passion is my fetish. I mostly write genre fiction but find writing erotic fiction fun.