All Comments on 'A Fashionable Husband Ch. 02'

I loved the story,would love to have more of this. The only flaw in the story is there is no way Willow would be charged, unless this was in Texas or Florida, a DA would be excoriated for charging her when it was self defense. George got his comeuppance, though I suspect in real life he would not be charged criminally, if he only suspected todd of date rape but didn't have proof he couldn't be charged. Would be civilly liable though.

good story but would have never gone to court unless the DA was a compete wackjob

Alright, people. Remember this is a fictional story. It comes out of the mind of the author. Anything is possible. If you don't agree, then you don't like science fiction. That also comes out of the mind of the author.

Shame Todd didn't finish the job. William/Willow is a total waste of oxygen.

In your comments reply you say ....." If you don't agree, then you don't like science fiction" ..... but in the story you say ....."I try my best to make them as close to real life as possible"..... Make your mind up FFS.

Intriguing story beautifully written and with interesting characters - What's not to like! :) Thanks for the story Toby,

Kel

Amazing that some readers support Todd, a convicted rapist who drugged his victims. Willow did not deserve to be kidnapped and tortured. I loved his transformation

I love these kind of love making stories even those and fetishes , good work

WoW... This is how a story should be told from start to finish a great story to be proud of .x

This is one of the most beautifully written and emotionally exhausting stories I have ever read. Thank you for writing it.