All Comments on 'A Father-Daughter Deal'

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HS98HS98over 1 year agoAuthor

@Anonymous

Could be a lot of reasons, really, but what I was going for was that he was giving her a chance to show off and surprise him with that new body of hers as she exited the building, rather than for him to find her still sleeping on a bed or something.

AmbulAmbul6 months ago

They both want to display her new sexy and very busty body in public. I would to read that Penny and Tony take her nascent exhibitionism to the next level, beyond just impressing their acquaintances. Perhaps Tony could set up a CamGirl studio in their mansion for Penny to strut her stuff in front of a paying audience.

AmbulAmbul6 months ago

Fantastic and brilliantly done. This over-the-top story of a father who intentionally has his daughter's body modified with huge tits and ass and filled lips seemingly all to impress their snobby and equally rich acquaintances that they are just as good as when Penny's late

mother, apparently with a supermodel body, who carried their wealth with dignity and had the respect of their rich peers. Penny, an enthusiastic enhanced bimbo fucktoy of her "daddy," can hardly wait to impress their snobbish friends - with her astonishing enhanced body. I love this seeming parody of

big tits and cocksucking skill somehow equating with class and elegance. Love

it!

HS98HS986 months agoAuthor

@Ambul

I'm glad that you loved reading the story! Can't disagree with your positive comments and I hope you'll like my other stories as well.

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