All Comments on 'A Few Days Away'

Oh, yes!

Sex in a public space is always exciting, and you wrote it well. The camera was an additional excitement.

Well done and most enjoyable. The voyeur hotel clerk added that special something to the story as well as the vividly described build up and oral sex description. Thanks for submitting.

Fuck yeah ... hot

Fantastic Story, 1st of a series?

So sexy; I want to be in that lobby

Absolutely amazing story! So hot, so naughty, so fun! I love your style of writing and would love to see more. I would recently proof reading a bit next time tho, there were a lot of typos in this story.

Absolutely amazing story! So hot, so naughty, and so fun! I love your style of writing and I hope you continue. I would recommend proof reading a bit next time, there were a lot of typos in this story.

WHEW ! Now that was hot ! Loved the build up, the conversation, the playful, honest banter. You need a good editor, but otherwise this was a gem of a story. The dialogue was well done and very erotic. I would love for you to write a 3rd chapter with the two of them in bed all night. Your sexy writing skills are very, very good. You can do it. I have faith in you. Great premise for this story. Who says there’s nothing new in literotica ? Well done. An easy 5-😊😊😊😊😊’s

love this