All Comments on 'A First Date'

Great writing style. Loved it.

What a wonderful and well written story! Just one thing that was a little distracting was the missing commas. An example of this was when you wrote, “It’s not a Picasso Sam.” In a grammatically correct way, it should be, “It’s not a Picasso, Sam.” Other than small things like that, great story!

Delightfully presented first date.

This was fun! I suspect you are a little bit more than semiliterate.

Very talented writing.

Superbly written. Very erotic. I will enjoy reading more of your stories. Thankyou.

Very beautiful, the way I imagine a date should go.

The story meant a lot to me, I basically have never been on any dates in my 55 years of life.

It was full of tenderness, and love, I can only hope there’s a sequel, as well as be as good as writer as you are.

Please continue writing, this story was one of the best.

Love everything about nudism/nude beaches/voyeurisms - beautiful ladies/senior and young...

The story is well written and the structure is fine. I visit nudist beaches and I think people should not perform sexual acts there, but in this story it is not annoying but erotic.