All Comments on 'A Game of Chess Ch. 01'

It's a great story. But don't let the men win. That would leave a bad taste that they got away for what they did.

The sex scenes are wonderfully written. Usually i dont like non consent but i am glued to this one.

@Anonymous 07/06/20

Thank you for your comment. It is readers like you that take a moment to comment and appreciate that keeps me encouraged. 😊

Unlike its prequel The Girl Next Door which was an "ambush" story, this one is more like a "face off". The involved parties will keep fighting, one gaining over the other alternately, till the final chapter that will decide who actually won.

Although very well written, I found the ordeal that Dr. Maithili suffered lacking in poetic justice even though in life there is hardly any poetic justice

@Nayna

Thanks for your comment. I assume you are saying that her ordeal was way too much in comparison to her crimes. Well, the way I thought was from the men's point of view. They are rich and powerful men who never take no for an answer and when such people feel slighted, they often lash out with a disproportionately sinister revenge.

This is a really great story, not just erotic but also interesting. Good job author. Also are you on Wattpad? I would love to read your stories if you are