All Comments on 'A Game of HORSE with a Twist'

I lost interest somerwhere around the first or second word and was long gone before you brought out the mental illness and imaturity of the 2 prime characters. So even a 1 would challenge my integrity.

Was this a racist story? Of course! the white couple seemed retarded and the black guys had to be drug dealers: "Skillz took a bag of weed from his pocket"...1*

If even your description has to reference 'three black guys', you may want to put a story like this in Fetish or Interracial instead of Loving wives,

You are now the proud author of the worst story ever written. You win the Vogon award.

you have your little "story" and it punched all the cuckold, ir hit list.

feel proud, and happy. now go away and never write again

Someone has to post poorly written racist shit in LW, so why not this clown? He has been a member for an entire month and usually hangs out in incest. On the other hand, he's really a bad writer. 2 *s and only one 😁! Sad.

Amerryman

You have really kissed off the trolls. How dare you have the audacity to post a story that has the three things these idiots hate. 1. A wife who fucks others (just ignor the fact that this category is specifically for those stories) 2. You dare to mention black men *gasp 3. You committed the ultimate sin and mentioned that these guys had 9” cocks ( it hurts their delicate natures when you say someone is over three times as big as them)

Now they will dedicate their time bombarding your story with dumb comments and will proudly announce they are giving you scores of 1*. Personally, while it wasn’t the hottest story, I felt it was perfect for the category as the husband loved watching as she got screwed senseless. Keep it up and post more in the future.

Or is there a "Stupid Shit" category? Because this was just ridiculous and obviously posted just to troll the readers. Congratulations! You wrote a really horrible story!

1 star

1*

Please no more of this trash.

So that means it's in the perfect category. Only a racist puke would complain about that. Keep posting stories like this here as that's exactly the type of story Literotica intended for this category. Let the small minded idiots whine like little spoiled brats if they don't get their way.

This story has a wife who enjoys being naked in public. She also enjoys getting some additional dick. It also has a husband who enjoys watching his wife get that dick as well. And of course a few young guys who are more than happy to give her that dick. So from what I can see, everyone gets what they want. Nothing to complain about here.

Love to read more! Maybe the ultimate cuckolding- being black bred.

I proudly give this trash a ONE STAR vote in your honor.

Anything goes. I weep for my country.

The story meets those expectations. Perfect Meh.

You know, could just ONE of you poodle peckered cuck fans write a story with real minority characters instead of these cardboard cutout? Jus asking for my Homey

interesting at first then went down hill fast and crashed into a tree, everybody died, And we cheered

Couldn't get past the first few paragraphs. 1*

Really bad! 1*

Sometimes you think things could not get any worse then this crops up

This felt like humor and satire. This story wasn't very arousing or amusing.

To them to come over anytime they want to sell you weed for $500 and fuck the wife. She loved being a slut for them. Why bother? I mean if she getting that much and it makes her happy why stay with the slut? One star for adultery. One star for the overall stupidity of the story.

Hate to break it to all but most street level drug dealers are fucking the female customers . Especially the younger ones who don’t have cash. My friends cousins best friend is black and sold pot I think he said. He gave all the options to hot girls for free stuff. Way to many had his black dick down there throat. They said the reluctant ones that took on credit then eventually couldn’t pay all paid with their ass. What a bunch of no self respect sluts taking his drug dealing cock up their asses for free pot.

Never EVER and I mean EVER. Read what the anons and others say. Like one of the comments said, you hit a nerve when you put White Female sleeping with Black Males. It ALWAYS happens. Could have done with a better lead up, and I hope there is a second part to explain the husband's role in the story. But all in all, not a bad story.

exactly like something my wife would do

she loves black cock and she has done 3 before

and we both loved it

james_38671 yahoo com

Nice ir troll piece man. A whore like this would make culture sick.

My wife did that with 2 big black cocks and let me eat 2 creampies from her pussy now I get to eat all her creampies and suck them off geez I love hot cum l can't get enough..love being my wife's cum dispose

If this was real, she’d have HIV now

Nice I liked it .I have watched my wife getting fucked by big back cocks. If it is your thing it is all good would love to read more of this story