All Comments on 'A Genie for Frank Ch. 04'

I'm thrilled to see you continue your writing! Thank you for the update.

Still enjoyable. Needs proof reading.

You had a lot of spelling mistakes. I think some words were in the wrong place at times as well. Try to work on that please.

Don’t make us wait so long for the next chapter...

The content is excellent. Love where the story seems to be heading. Keep on doing you. JT

I’ll get on it. I have some ideas.

The pacing is nice, the essential decency of the main character remains which is always nice. The varied desires are welcome..... Please continue writing!!!!!!!

A good read. Well done. Could use a couple more chapters.

I wondered if I had read chapters 1 and 2 a few months back and then temporarily lost track of this author. I saw in chap 3 comments that someone else thought this author was doing a near repeat of this story from years back. But whether this was new story, a redo, or a similar tale, or a rework of some earlier works, it has been very enjoyable this time around, thank you for a fun and entertaining erotic story. This is what Tony Nelson should have done for Jeanie in the first season! But the writers and producers had to keep it PG and satisfy the advertisers, too bad. And too bad it couldn't have been at least a soft 'X' rating! TTFN

Wonderful!!! Curious to see if Franks wife ever gets a clue?

Great story. I hope you will continue the series.

Loving it

accepting Wendy seems like a bit rushed. He did'nt lick and swallowed her cum, like it was described by his first geenie. Further i did not recognize his explizit wish to set her free. Some counting: 4 coworkers / employer, 2 geenies, 1 slave and an wife with newfound abition to dyke her men out to her friends. 8+ women to satisfy and beeing constantly surroundet by doesen't sound like much peace anymore. I recignize more miswordings then in previous chapters, as i hope to find more storycontent then only more sex.

Fun stuff!