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Click hereJane went through a similar list of questions in her head as Matt did when the website first appeared for him. She was more curious about how this was happening than Matt and less interested in watching. However, she was unable to come up with any answers.
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Anonymousover 2 years agoThe list of the cast of characters is not only unnecessary but useless as the names mean nothing until the characters appear in the story. There are a lot of technical errors of punctuation, and some stilted, unnatural dialogue. In casual conversation, English speakers don't say, "I am excited.." or "it is great" etc. They say, "I'm excited" and "It's great", etc.
I suggest you skip the mini-bios and listen to how real people talk.
Lagnapover 2 years agoAs soon as you bash president trump I was done with your story. It may have been good but that was unnecessary.
