All Comments on 'A Girl Gone'

Before we met, my wife was between marriages and was a regular at a bar with a pool table. She had a "stable" of guys she would meet there regularly and fuck them, sometimes several in one night. Told me she never wore jeans, commando under a short skirt was much more convenient. Soon after we met she told me about this. I didn't believe her so she took me there and within the first hour she fucked three guys, introduced each one while she was fucking him. All 3 and about 12 more were at our wedding. The 5 others couldn't make it.

Married at 17, two kids and gives herself to anyone...

You write with a clarity that is enticing and an urgency that is arousing.

Well done!

Wow. Just wow.

It's a hot scene. Like how you describe it- very sensual.

What a wonderful writer this little Mouse is.

you are perfect

Well written beginning. Can’t wait for the next chapter.