All Comments on 'A Girl Surrenders Ch. 01'

Very hot, me being a slave too, I can surely relate to this scenario and love it and am very anxious to read more! :)

I have read a lot of these short stories and this definatly was not one of the best. It was hardly okay. The idea behind the story was just slightly interesting, and the description not very clear. Good work for an Amature, however. :)

RUN girl! BTW story is poorly written.