All Comments on 'A Good Girl Gone Bad Ch. 01: Ella'

Such good writing and story flow build anticipation. Your vocabulary is so rich! Just a couple of typos – not too distracting. Worthing of 5* rating.

I had to close my eyes for the pee part - not my jam lol 😇, but otherwise I will say it oozed with unapologetic hotness and very well written!

@dmallord - thank you. I do my best on typos, but a few always leak in. Em

delightful ,as always

@Jackie - thank you so much. It was a case of a shared kink bubbling to the surface. Know it’s not everyone’s cup of… er… tea. 😊. Em

@lc69hunter - thank you 🙏 Em

I really enjoyed the writing, and second dmallard's comment about vocabulary (not that it's in any way surprising, it's just nice to see the variety). I liked the character development in just a short scene, you were able to convey a lot about all three characters economically. I enjoyed the overall tone, as well.

You always find new and interesting ways to surprise me with your stories.

And you still have that enviable ability to merge sweet, loving and caring with kinky and naughty.

Well done.

Oh god yes, that is excellently hot. I love how you write about Ella, from her plump fleshiness, to her oozing pussy and then her just letting go and being her 'bad' self, spurting piss as she came. Very, very arousing :)

@BelleCanzuto - thank you for the encouraging feedback 😊 Em

@Djmac1031 - thank you, hun 😊 Em

@Anon - starting: “Oh god yes” - thank you for the kind feedback 😊 Em

A budding gem of a story to parallel the budding friendship of the characters. 🌹 ;) So very well written with your typical infusions of humor, charm. character development and kinky sexiness. 👏🏼 Bravo!

@steelyblue73 - thanks, hin 😊 Em

It's like... you took my vulnerabilities and used them to make me cum.

Wait. Was that not a classy comment?

Thank you... I'm VERY excited to read what I... Ella does next...

Another EmilyMiller story, another time I wanna be Emily in the story…

@EStaccato - thank you for the inspiration, hun 😘 Em

@Victoria14xs - I’ll take that as a win 🏆 Em

Definitely my flavor of story. Great job! Between the bottle play and the wetting, I don't know if I could handle much more...

@Theylo_Bleu - thank you, hun. I’ve been writing less kinky sex recently (with some exceptions). Leaned into the kink with this one. Em

I love the character of Ella. I love her astatic and her hesitation combined with her desires. I really hope she gets pushed more and more and breaks out of that shell of hers. The sex was also really hot.

@Sunstone779 - I love Ella too 😊. Em

Interesting to see Em from this perspective; she seems more naive or innocent or something than from her own pov. I totally got Nothing vibes as soon as Ella mentioned college, glad to see at the end I wasn't imagining things. Well I was imagining things, but not that.

@djrip - I tried very hard to write Amy as Amy and not just my perspective shifted sideways. I wanted a fresh view. Plan A is Ch 2 is my perspective and Ch 3 Ella’s perspective. But the last is going to be tough to do. Em

Well that was fun. Not exactly my cup of… pee ;-) … but fun, anyway.

I loved "My friend who is a girl…”. Cute.

@MrPixel - I’m going to blame “Ella” for me leaning into that kink. If you found this was too Lee-centric, you might want to check out her companion story 😊. Em

On to part two ... good stuff.

@Rob_Royale - cool, hope you enjoy it 😊 Em

I loved this line. So true

“Underneath, I want to be nasty, and to be used, and I want to do all these things I have been too frightened to do."

@Luv2bnaked4u - thank you for saying so 😊 Em

... You know, I take back what I said to you the other day in our private conversation. Maybe I do have a pee fetish after all. Heh. Amazing digital penmanship, as always.

@Devinter - thank you 😊 Em

Have only just discovered your stories but will be reading all of them. Very well written and well developed characters and very hot.

@Hemsley - thank you so much. I write a lot of different stuff, so check the tags. Em

So good! Top notch storytelling. I loved everything about this story and can’t wait to read more.

@DocTemplar - thank you so much. I have a bit of a pause after Ch. 02 as my muse has stuff on. But I’ll finish the story in coming weeks. Emily

Great character arc on Ella, really well written. Thanks for the story

@JJ82490 - thank you - still need to finish Chapter 4 - Emily

Just wow!! That was so exceedingly hot that I almost forgot to say how well-written it is, and how I wish I could give it more than 5 stars xxxxx

@Pixiehoff - thank you - the series spins off into fetish territory - not for all 😊 Emily

Thanks Emily - but as they are fetishes I share, I am thoroughly loving this series. Pix

@Pixiehoff - yay 😀 Emily