All Comments on 'A Good Little Trance Slut'

Must be a pretty intense website she found there

Not much of a story....not even the start of one.

I thought that it was a good short story. Short=story authors usually don't have the luxury to spend chapters on character development, so they do what they can. I got used to it.

I think you're off to an excellent start--I'd suggest that follow ups might be about other girls getting "ensnared" by the website

This is so good. this hypnoslut was made feel good reading. It is a nice feeling. More please.

Love it! I'd love to see a sequel! Keep up the great work.

I shouldn't have gotten excited by your story, but WOW did I ever. Very smooth read and HOT. Thank you.