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All Comments on 'A Halloween Hunt'

by CantonStreetWriter

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AnonymousAnonymous6 months ago

Three strikes: Not telling at the start that readers need to know about the show; several areas that disagree with each other (& reference to putting on clothes that the narrator doesn't mention having), & the reference to "Then pants...".

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