All Comments on 'A Hard Lesson in Responsibility'

This was a fast-paced story with good dialogue exchanges. I was surprised it ended so abruptly. I hadn't looked at the tags or the length of the story. So many questions: about the brief episode with the father and the obvious moral thoughts of the girl going forward. Clearly, given the other potential fathers she wasn't leaning toward a family situation - even marriage. I didn't know much about Ogg other that the news in the Forum of his passing. I'm having trouble connecting the theme with Ogg, guessing it is written in a style he uses? I do like the story. It flows well and is realistically portrayed.

I'm not normally interested in I/T, but this was well-done and, especially these days, topical. *****

This hardly fits in this category.

Well written, good flow. Enjoyed it.

Will there be more to this?

I certainly hope so.

Steve is a narrative hero as if in a story of a Greek tragedy. He sets the actions into play; both pro and con and now the actual "hero" character must make the choice.