All Comments on 'A Hard Summer Day with Mom's Friend'

Personally I thought this was a very hot story and very erotic for a second try at it. I hope you continue writing!

Story was really well written. Keep Writing!

Well written, a nice different twist (had to cross my legs a couple times!) Needed to look up frenulum...fortunately mine had been destroyed by a procedure! Keep writing!

why Brian didn't just give the bitch a slap and tell her to f off the first time she tried it.

So 1* for abusive crap.

A good story and I agree with telling the bitch off. He is a teenager though. So not experienced! She seemed to like ball kicking!

one star, no guy enjoys having his balls crushed, I would kill the bitch.

I love when people take these stories so seriously, acting as if you committed a war crime by writing about ball busting. Anyway I liked the story a lot, especially the post-orgasm torture. More!

Wow, she is a bitch. I hope he kneed her in the clit some time.

Not my cup of tea, but some guys enjoy the pain.

Although I don't see how.

If a woman did that to me, she had better leave before I recover and hope I don't know where she lives.

The thought of being with.a stronger, taller, clever, braver, playful, hot, adorable, funny, silly, wacky,, kinky,, amorous,, naughty, fun, talented, skilled,, exciting,, erotic, muscular,, mischievous, arousing, generous, thoughtful, and all-around resourceful woman who knows what she wants, needs, desires, yearns, etc., and always has an idea, rhythm, plan, trick, prop, recipe, game, activity, or something else in mind to get, make find, and / or cause something, .. the sort of woman who can really "unlock a guy's spirit, inner child, potential, energy, etc." [animals has tons of them [the lady from FLCL, for 1]... that thought always makes me excited. Somehow, that thought ran through my mind while browsing and reading your story. ... [my dream busters: xena, Elvira, Gabrielle, aphrodite, Jessica rabbit, Lara, the dark queen from battletoads, Harley, Selina, Babs Gordon [pre-oracle], nico Robin, the 2 love ru ladies,, android 18, videl, and Samus aran, just to name some characters.]

I love femdom stories that tease and are sexual in their construction but this story was so very basic.

Ignore the nay sayers, your story is great! What eighteen year old, wouldn't trade a kick in balls, for orgasms from a hot 34 year old.