All Comments on 'A Hole Between Rooms Ch. 04'

Everyday a new chapter... I'll surely wait for this one (Jay's writing whatever happened in the phone to show us what to read)

Thanks Jay.

Verry nice build story line I love it but at this pace it will take six month before there will be any action

you could have put these for chapters in just one I think.

but please keep going

thanks for the good times

I wish it was progressing faster, but then again, no…

5*

Tc

Can't wait. Great build up till now

The meat in a sister sandwich?

I enjoy short stories, but this was TEASING !

Love this story and these characters. I'm also ok with the deliciously slow build up. Rather have that than read one page and it's all over. Looking forward to more.

I hope you write more soon, I want to see how this goes.

I'm enjoying this build-up! Thank you and please keep this going!

Keep going, this has the potential to become a very great story

Damn. Keeping us wanting more

Liking this build up. Making the characters more than 2D fuck dolla. But actual ppl w/ feelings, motives and voices. Keep up the good work. Can't wait for the ending