All Comments on 'A Homecoming Pt. 03'

by Benultimo

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ag2507ag2507over 3 years ago

Sorry, the texting stuff didn't do it for me: it was hard to follow, interrupted the flow, and meant that I started skipping the texts. Didn't seem to detract from the story by doing so.

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
Girls in control...

There seems tobe a hidden agenda here with the girls controlling the play. I'm not sure about the sexting bit, is Ben being set up ? Very enjoyable so far looking forward to more.

KingCuddleKingCuddlealmost 3 years ago

Ummmm....When is Ben scheduled to leave?

Book me into his room, please!

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I have had a now too long but varied, interesting and fortunate life. I have been a school-failure, migrant, cabinet-maker, mature-age student, teacher, academic, historian, etc., etc. As a husband I was found wanting, as a father, friend, companion less so. And I have always ...

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