All Comments on 'A Hostile Takeover Ch. 10'

Now this is getting completely stupid. I'm out

Award Winners! The Stupidest Couple in the World!

Who else would do these things without talking to the other. Ever hear of borrowing someone else's phone or use a landline (email?)? After all, they couldn't reach the other for what, a week? Yet, they believe what they're told. Even after Carl learns they set him up by videoing him, he goes along with them about emailing Sarah, etc. This story started out credible, but it keeps getting more and more ridiculous.

Now what? Carl's going to wake up finding his dick/balls have been removed...being replaced with a pussy? Sarah wakes up with 48 DDD boobs with piercings and tattoo's with things like Queen of Spades, Matt's Pussy?

I'm done reading here. Getting to ridiculous.

I am not into Gay stories. I dont like where this has turned. I am out.

That's an owned couple! I feel sorry for them to be sure, and I still fear one, or even both of them doing themselves in. It's a great story though, very captivating...

Thanks for sharing, Jackie.

Its getting hot! Dont listen to noisy anonymous. Keep going!

BRILLIANT keep it going

Please keep going

are you going to finish this stupidity? Curious to see how more you can make a joke of a story, lol.

Can’t wait for chapter 11 been checking almost daily please don’t make us wait too long

Brilliant story please continue

I too enjoyed this story and the mystery it offers, and I'm waiting for the conclusion.

Jackie.