All Comments on 'A Hot Day's Adventure'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
excellent story

This story is far superior to "A Secret Spot"; the author's efforts to improve that story, the result of which A Hot Day's Adventure, has been well worth it. Five stars.

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