by DarkBreezly
Your Illustrated stories are really the best on this site for both the storyline and the illustrations. Hopefully the wait for chapter seven won't be as long. I saw what you meant about the illustrations, though, as Val looked somewhat gray and Brad looked a lot darker than he looked in previous chapters. However, if I could give you 10 stars and a favorite point I would!!
Amazing stories and the illustrations are so great with all hot looking babes. what a terrific imagination. I like the fact that you have so many illustrations too and am looking forward to the next chapter. Your stories and illustrations are the best on this site, I would rate them a 10. Thanks, keep it coming, (Nudge nudge wink wink.)
The illustrations were a very nice touch, and I do hope the story continues, as this would be a terrible way to end the story.
Give next chapter as early as possible. Illustrations are extremely good and realistic. Don't kill the interest... Next chapter at the earliest please
Worth the wait. Brad needs to suck off Geoff. Then Geoff needs to take Brad up the ass, while at the same time fucking Val. Val needs to arrange that.
That’s my wish for 2021. They also need to get caught by someone who is initially horrified. Perhaps a Professor, Librarian, Social Worker, or Priest/Nun. Yes, I went there. It should be someone who could make their lives complicated or miserable if they chose. Then, they will need to seduce that person or those people.
I have really enjoyed this series. The pictures have enhanced the experience and I appreciate all of the hard work that has gone into the project, so thank you.
I can see that there are many ways this can go forward, and am sure you will do the future justice if you choose to continue. I must say I am glad you did not go down the confontration route, rather stayed with raunchy fun.
total satisfaction - am spent - and the pictures aided the verbal description immensely! WOW
Great story. How soon before the next chapter? Maybe the parents show up?
Ready for the next chapter. How soon until its ready? And yes maybe the parents arrive.
Although a predictable story line your writing style and the addition of the artwork makes this series 5 star!
A very sensuous story line. A first threesome and extra hard orgasms make a very erotic story. Adding the close family ties only adds heat to the sizzling story.