All Comments on 'A King's Legacy Ch. 12'

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Sxualchocol8Sxualchocol8over 1 year ago

Two small favors - 1) please put some indicator to show where the chapter ends, and the author's notes begin, like a dashed line or even just some stars. Ppl get engrosed into the story, and the author's notes get the reader (ok, me) brain whiplash going from one thing to another. And 2) please keep up the great work! Your storyline is very good. Awesome job!

PupBayouPupBayouover 1 year agoAuthor

A lot of that happens because the extra spaces i put there get clipped away when posting here. Which is great for dome parts, but it does hurt at the end haha. Thanks for the encouragement. Hope you enjoy the next scene.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 year ago

I like the friendly Orcs! Write on!

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Just a gay pup that likes writing. Always happy to hear feedback! Feel free to message if you have any questions! I do have a discord for the King's Legacy Chronicles, and I'll be posting some exclusive stuff there before it hits print!

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