by nancygibson
Well written..good story line.. good character development and a finely tuned erotic closing. May we have more please?
As a short story it's believable and draws the reader in quite effortlessly. I was left wondering if there might be more to come. Great story-telling!
Perfect depiction of what can happen at a "war". Bring us more stories like this.
Excellent job. It made me wonder if I was somewhere among the crowd in the background...