All Comments on 'A Knights Honour'

nice

I'd suggest breaking up your longer paragraphs-they were daunting to read

Been a long time since I read anything of such high quality caliber.. that was hot. I became invested in Amelia and Valmer from start to finish. You did a great job of setting it up, and it had the right balance of erotic sex, and story plot. Great job, continue writing!

And don't worry about paragraph length, it was totally fine for me.