by Monroe05
Some warning about this being a gay romance would have been nice, I'm not into that, but I kept reading til I got the the first 'Nigga', I find that offensive whether or not you intended to be offensive with Devin being called that.
Dialogue or not, it wasn't necessary. All of the cussing & "bruh", really detracted from the story. It was good otherwise, but that was a serious turn off.
I have no desire to read gay stories, post it in the proper place and I won't 1 bomb you.