by copfucker
Your details, the pacing. Everything is perfect. Your character is so vivid,so raw!!! Well written. Normally I cannot stand first person but this was so well done . I forgot I was reading a first person and just became a willing spectator.... Well....done!!
Thanks, that is really great to hear! Watch out for Part 2 which is now pending. It has women in it ;-)
Wow, to hear those words coming from your mouth :-) Thank you so much. I read Needlepoint and Cream Pie earlier today and I was blown away. I am now halfway Filled with Joy, and again, I am thrilled. English is not my native language, so I will never be able to have your rich choice of words, but you certainly are an example to follow. Again, thanks!