All Comments on 'A Lesson in Humility'

Too much spent on showing how bitchy she is versus the sexual encounter. The time after was a blink. The guy was an empty shadow, a means to an end but not a person. This seems intended to be a fast stroke piece, not a novela. That's fine. It is a solid start at it. The story just feels like a draft that needs fleshing out to get the readers' flesh out.

It was an interesting way of having a one night stand between two strong willed people ,, Showing how one can find ones self when they let go