All Comments on 'A Life Unknown'

This is a very original story, and that's not so common here on Literotica. Congratulations are due!

This is a very interesting story line, and nicely written other than the ending. Somehow, it needs a little more development. We jump from the sadistic and controlling husband falling, with a knife pointed downward, to a time at least fifteen years later. Ehhhhhh, that's quite a leap.

Keep writing, but don't leave huge gaps when you're covering major changes in the circumstances.

-- KVK

The story was interesting but I really don't get it. Which was her real life? Either, neither, or both? Both lives were hers from 17 to 36. Don't get it. Was an interesting read though.

... I either didn't get it, or I didn'tlike the ending if I did get it. You raised a lot of emotions, your story will stay with me awhile. Keep writing, being able to arose emotions means that you're doing something right!

This was an excellent story, if a little less erotic than I'd been hoping. Really very well-written and evocative.

I've liked all of your stories - this one was a little different, sadder - especially when she dies from the knife at the end but the other Celia has had a really good, happy and loved life.

Mirriam

I get it dear, I really do. Especially after reading 324A. Do we all have another life, being lived in our heads? And which one is real? My god, you inspire me. I mean that.