by angel_in_disguise
I get it dear, I really do. Especially after reading 324A. Do we all have another life, being lived in our heads? And which one is real? My god, you inspire me. I mean that.
I've liked all of your stories - this one was a little different, sadder - especially when she dies from the knife at the end but the other Celia has had a really good, happy and loved life.
Mirriam
This was an excellent story, if a little less erotic than I'd been hoping. Really very well-written and evocative.
... I either didn't get it, or I didn'tlike the ending if I did get it. You raised a lot of emotions, your story will stay with me awhile. Keep writing, being able to arose emotions means that you're doing something right!
The story was interesting but I really don't get it. Which was her real life? Either, neither, or both? Both lives were hers from 17 to 36. Don't get it. Was an interesting read though.
This is a very interesting story line, and nicely written other than the ending. Somehow, it needs a little more development. We jump from the sadistic and controlling husband falling, with a knife pointed downward, to a time at least fifteen years later. Ehhhhhh, that's quite a leap.
Keep writing, but don't leave huge gaps when you're covering major changes in the circumstances.
-- KVK
This is a very original story, and that's not so common here on Literotica. Congratulations are due!