by Olive_DD
This has great potential, can't wait to hear more. Unlike a previous commenter, I hope he doesn't take her to an amateur strip night, that is just too much of a cliche. Let's have them simply go dancing and 'things happen' to the dress while they are dancing.
you left me imagining the dress: tiniest LBD, so tiny the pubes will have to go. We'll wait and see...
Great start, looking forward to seeing where this goes and what they have in store for London!
I agree with topcattopone: no strip club. Let them go dancing and bits of her dress fall away, which she likes so continues dancing even as she becomes more and more exposed and finally naked, surrounded by the clothed people on the dance floor. Unintentional stripoffs are the best kind!
Great read, nicely written. My only criticism is the setting, as none of this quite fits with London. Distances are all wrong, coloured (US spelled) fish in rock pools - nothing quite makes sense.
@Anonymous, I did change the location at the last minute. You have a keen eye!
Mind you, Gatwick to Brighton is less than an hour so its not that far wrong. But you are right, the bit about the rock-pools was originally written with a different city in mind. The next installment is a night out on the town so will hopefully be right at home in London!
Hi All. If anyone is interested Part II of this story has just been published. check it out here: https://literotica.com/s/a-little-more-harmless-exhibitionism
Extremely well-written descriptions that paint a picture for the reader's imagination to explore.