by WalterWoody
Good premise.
Why did their tryst have to be so shortly before the business opened? That FORCED the action to proceed quickly. Too quickly.
No preliminary discussion between them as to did he take care of himself? How often? Did he watch porn? What kind turned him on most? And the same for her. And what an opportunity -- missed -- for them to watch together while foreplaying for a while before getting down to the blowjob.
By this I mean that once they got to the actual sex, it went too fast.
No teasing handjob. No dialog about what she was GOING to do to him. Did that sound good to him?
Very little tit play.
No pussy play. No touching. No smelling. No tasting. None.
Could have been much better.
Four stars.
If only I were the employee! Love this story - good foreplay talk the days before the act