All Comments on 'A Long Day Ch. 03'

Obviously a committed caring couple, but... messing with some one's workplace (by her comment, not a very flexible one) and sheesh... distracted driving much? To tell her to 'be safe' is rather ridiculous. Having bitched about content, I will say you have a good, solid writing style. :)

Great writing style, but a little more realism please.

how would have looked to the dos or cps if she had killed herself or someone else while driving that way?

I sincerely loved it. Please continue the series :(

I imagined the eggs inside of me also .

What comes next??? I love your writing style and I'm curious