All Comments on 'A Long, Strenuous Night Pt. 02'

It’s very well written but I couldn’t finish it. DD:LG is something that you should really put into the Tags. It’s a hard limit as well as being a massive turn off for me. That said I can honestly say that LOTS of people are going to love this story.

You clearly have talent. I look forward to reading more of your stories, that aren’t DD:LG.

Thanks for sharing and best of luck with your writing.

Tess (uk)

ps I found the glitch in the first chapter that had me confused. Her present day rescuer is He/ Him but during the 11th chapter you slipped into calling the character he/ him instead.

Hey Tess, thank you so much for your feedback and your kind words! The tagging aspect is duly noted :P. I hope to hear your opinion on works that suit your taste in the near future <3 Happy readinggg XD