All Comments on 'A Lost Daughter Ch. 19'

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robert_bellamyrobert_bellamyover 1 year ago

Best author of this site! Great writing!

stonedinstilletosstonedinstilletosover 1 year ago

Holy moly. I never knew I could get aroused by that but wow. What does this say about me? And 2 updates this close together? Whatever we did to deserve this, lets do it again to get more of this story. I have a suspicion where its going but I want to see if I’m right.

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Great Writing!!

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

i love it. Cant wait for things to come. You are great

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

This is so deeply disturbing; you need therapy.

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Love the story but....kind of too too dark....no more of ...think you pushed the envelope too far..death not sexy ..get back to Sharon, Barb and introduce Lexi morr in the Descent...much much more sexy

PiusPaulPiusPaulover 1 year ago

Will there be more chapters? Can't wait to read about the corruption of Kayla.

CounselorWhiteCounselorWhiteover 1 year ago

Keep GOING be darker!

RodimusMikeRodimusMikeover 1 year ago
The honest truth.

Both Amber & Sienna have deathwishes that is gonna end up killing them,and for what,for an adrenaline rush.And Dad basically enabling them to do it.But what Sienna said about Kayla is so true,she fucking needs to die because she is the Evil Bitch here.

So I hope if the author finishes off with 20 I hope they get rid of Kayla for good.Oh and for gods sake I hope Dads mentality kicks in and gets Amber and Sienna the help they need by rehab or something.They've had 20+ years of fun living dangerously but if it don't stop they are looking at a hole 6 feet in the ground.I really want this to end on a happy note.

morbiusrgmorbiusrgover 1 year ago

This is dark, but also humbling as a reader. I love the entire series. Thank you.

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Please continue this series

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

One of the greatest authors on literotica. Anyone knows if he is going to continue? He hasn't published anything on his patreon since october :(

Terri19Terri19about 1 year ago

I like your writing but this is getting to sick for me and taking the excitement away. I find now I just reading it to find out what happens but the excitement is fading fast for me.

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