All Comments on 'A Love Story Pt. 03'

This chapter continues directly from the previous one, which needs to be read first. There is an improvement here in both plot and character development as the story unfolds, but there is unfortunately too much brevity in the introduction, in the plot, character development, and the love scene. Greater enhancement in future chapters in all areas would improve the story.

Your grammar is atrocious.

I'm not sure if this series belongs in Romance. It feels more like Erotic Couplings to me.

I use Grammarly, so it read correctly. I will try to do better in the future.