All Comments on 'A Love to Last Ch. 01'

If reading about one of the meanest fucking bitches ever, then this is the story for you. Far, far too violent, hate filled and unsexy. Bye!!!

Nothing good so far in this story. Maybe the chapter was too short. But a bitchy monster who abuses a helpless small child out of her own jealousy is not a pleasant story. Her son grows up to be some sort of gay whore yet she still treats him like a child. And Ben - after a lifetime of abuse - is still polite to this scag. Other than the two brothers care for each other, nothing good happened here.

People are so impatient these days. For me it's a good start. 5 stars to you.

Anon, the story just started and you're already hating 😏😏😏😏 some of you have issues from home and you bring your frustrations here. I'm sure there's lots of shitty stories for shitty people on this site. So bye!

Vanalas tells some of the best stories on this site

Please continue this story exactly as you wrote this first chapter. Don’t listen to the negative feedback. 5 ⭐️ from me.

Wicked step-monster is really upsetting the Anonymous community! Something tells me Ben and Jim are going to be fine…eventually. Five Stars from me.

I can’t and won’t finish that story it’s triggering my PTSD from being tortured by my wicked and cruel stepmother. Please please please please please put a warning, this is sooo triggering and made me vomit.