by vanalas
Please do something about Elena! Ben doesn’t deserve how she treats him. This has gone on too long!
WOW, a hot Latin triangle that David, Jim and Ben don't even know is a triangle. I'm not sure I want to know what's going to happen when they find out, especially with an evil bitch like Elena taking her son's side. This might well be the wedge she needs to separate the stepbrothers. MLF
I’m worried that Jim will take after his mother when push comes to shove. I’m worried for Ben. Can’t stop feeling like I’m reading a telenovela and I mean that as a compliment! I adore your English, vanalas. Took me a long minute to understand that getting someone’s “line” would be getting their “number” in the US. Great read!!
Thanks for your comments, guys, I love hearing from you. More is coming and I just warn you to hang on to your seats
I can't wait for chapter 3. Elena must just hold it. Jim might love his brother Ben now I just hope he doesn't hate him when he realizes that David loves Ben and not him
Are you Filipino po ba idol? Can't wait for the next chapter. You're so good it feels like I'm reading a classic telenovela but in English.
btw ako yung nagsuggest sayo dati na magpost sa GayAuthors, nabasa ko na dun yung chapter 3, thank god triny ko icheck if may bago kang stories, good luck sa 2023, more stories to come lodi