All Comments on 'A Love to Last Ch. 03'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

OMG, there are so many questions that need to be answered here! There's so much tension between David, Ben and Jim right now. I have no idea what's going to happen when they find out who each other is in this triangle. I imagine Jim, who seems the most immature of the three, will be the most reactive. And I can only guess at the damage Elena will cause when she finds out that David wants Ben and not her son The only thing that I'm really sure about right now is that in Elena you've created one of the evilest characters ever written. My hope is that you plan on her getting paid back for the extreme cruelty she displayed this time. You've left me on the edge of my seat with this ***** chapter's cliffhanger ending, can't wait for the next one. MLF

dnsontndnsontnover 1 year ago

I really hope karma comes for Elena!

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

ang galing

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