All Comments on '"A Lover, Sister, Friend, Twin"'

Could have been a good story but it was poorly constructed. Story was all over the place and you definitely need an editor

This is so poorly written that I could not finish reading the first page.

Romantic , sexy, absolutely gorgeous....love it

thank you very much for the nice comments they mean a lot

Forget about the naysayers and haters. You are writing what you are truly passionate about. I love who and what you are writing about. You are my new favourite writer, and I am only at story number 2. Hello from Richmond B.C.

Love the story. Couldn't stop reading. When you find your special someone you know it. Maybe finish and tell us what happens next. Love your stories

Wow! Love the description of her business suit.

An amazingly loving story. I am looking forward to more of you with earnest