All Comments on 'A Lustful Growing Contagion Ch. 14'

This is by far my favorite series on the site right now, but your latest chapters have been a bit unfocused. It feels like you're jumping around too much, introducing new women and never following up on them, or teasing concepts but not seeing them through. Stay focused on your handful of established characters and let's see some progression of that, instead of a new person in your next chapter.

great job this great a little unfocused but great none the less