All Comments on 'A Maid's Journey to the Top'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
Awesome start

This is really great. Please continue!

SubtextSubtextover 3 years ago
Well Done

I liked your use of voice in this story! As the writer you brought yourself into the story with your inexact use of the language. This is how the maid/servant would express herself. I'd be happy to assist you with a little editing help.

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
Hot!

Will there be a second part? Please say yes!

romantictalesromantictalesover 3 years agoAuthor

@Subtext thanks so much! I have already submitted the second part. Maybe I will ask for help in the future ones!

PixiehoffPixiehoffabout 3 years ago

Gloriously sexy, well done x

petrolinapetrolina5 months ago

awsome. Thank you

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